Cleopatra - Revision history

Blondeshell: /* Introductions */

2014-09-30T21:59:01Z

‎Introductions

Blondeshell: /* Introductions */

2014-09-21T17:46:29Z

‎Introductions

Blondeshell: /* Story Arc */

2014-09-21T02:49:24Z

‎Story Arc

Blondeshell: /* Story Arc */ templatize

2014-09-21T02:29:36Z

‎Story Arc: templatize

Blondeshell: /* No More Missions */

2014-09-06T23:28:01Z

‎No More Missions

Blondeshell: templatize missions

2014-09-06T23:25:34Z

templatize missions

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Blondeshell: /* {{UL|Raid the Resistance Base}} */ update template

2014-02-02T01:47:40Z

‎{{UL|Raid the Resistance Base}}: update template

Blondeshell: circumvent redirect

2012-09-03T14:28:50Z

circumvent redirect

Blondeshell: circumvent redirect

2012-09-03T14:25:39Z

circumvent redirect

Isawa Koi: /* {{UL|Part Three: Five Minutes to Detonation}} */

2012-09-03T05:46:20Z

‎{{UL|Part Three: Five Minutes to Detonation}}

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 === Too Busy ===
-{{Missing Too Busy}}
+You got yourself a lotta things on your plate right now, hun. You get those taken care of and I'm sure I can fill it back up.
 === Too Low Level ===

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 === Too Busy ===
 {{Missing Too Busy}}
 === No More Missions ===

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 * [[Inspirations]]
-== Story Arc ==
+== Story Arcs ==
 === Organized Crusaders ===
 {{ArcAward|m=2}}

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 ==== Souvenir ====
-'''Loyalist Health Insurance'''
+{{Souvenir|Loyalist Health Insurance}}
 {{Mission:Organized Crusaders - Part One: What Has This Place Become?}}
 {{Mission:Organized Crusaders - Part Two: You're the Monster}}
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 ==== Souvenir ====
+{{Souvenir|Cleopatra's Plea}}
 {{Mission:No Man's Lady - Finale: You Know Me}}
 [[Category:Special Boss]]

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 === No More Missions ===
-I ain't got nothing more for you right now, hun. We did some good though, that's for sure, I ain't gonna forget this.
+'''If you chose to help the Resistance:'''
 == Store ==
 ''I gotta say, I'm impressed, {{character}}. At first I didn't think you were cut out to do the work the PPD does everyday. Instead, you've shown that you're worth ten of them rolled into one!''

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-{{Cutscene|Text=[[File:Contact_Small_Chief_Interrogator_Washington.jpg|thumb|100px|right|]]
+{{divbox|darkgray| |
+''Hello?! Hello! {{Character}}! This is Chief Interrogator Washington!''<br />
-''Hello?! Hello! {{Character}}! This is Chief Interrogator Washington!''
+''Cleopatra set you up - I'm fighting off some of the Resistance going after you, but I couldn't get them all!''<br />
 ''I'm doing everything I can here to help, you need to take down the Resistance, then meet me up in Nova!''}}

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−	{{Mission Briefing\|Type=Briefing\|Contact=Calvin Scott\|Text=	+	{{Mission Briefing\|Type=Briefing\|Contact=Calvin Scott (Praetorian)\|Text=

	{{Character}}. Good to see you are still alive and breathing. Tell me what's going on.		{{Character}}. Good to see you are still alive and breathing. Tell me what's going on.

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-{{Mission Briefing|Type=Briefing|Contact=Calvin Scott|Text=
+{{Mission Briefing|Type=Briefing|Contact=Calvin Scott (Praetorian)|Text=
 {{Character}}. Good to hear from you. What's your current situation? You're working with Cleopatra, right?
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 {{Mission Briefing|Contact=Chief Interrogator Washington|Text=So then, are you ready to confront the woman who tried to orchestrate your death, {{Character}}?
-{{blue|Those members of the Resistance working undercover for [[Calvin Scott]] should inform him of what is happening - before going to confront Cleopatra.}}
+{{blue|Those members of the Resistance working undercover for [[Calvin Scott (Praetorian)|Calvin Scott]] should inform him of what is happening - before going to confront Cleopatra.}}
 {{green|I'm ready, let's go.}}}}

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 Suga', things are goin' from bad to worse. We got word that the [[Syndicate]] already delivered all them bombs to those Crusader boys in [[the Resistance]].
-Now, I got myself a little idea of where they could be in the tunnels, but I ain't givin' you a guarantee that you'll find somethin' down there, suga'. You're gonna have to go down there and destroy any sorta thing that looks like they might be usin' for bombs.
+Now, I got myself a little idea of where they ''could'' be in the tunnels, but I ain't givin' you a guarantee that you'll find somethin' down there, suga'. You're gonna have to go down there and destroy any sorta thing that looks like they might be usin' for bombs.
 Also I got word that the gal leadin' the charge goes by the name of Poster Gal. We catch her, we can put a stop to this bombin' plot before it gets started.
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 '''Combat start:''' '' ''<br />
-:{{orange|missing text}}
+:'''Resistance 1:''' ''We're gonna slam this badger 'till he stops moving!''
 ----
 '''Before combat:''' '' ''<br />
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 '''Combat start:''' '' ''<br />
-:'''Resistance 1:''' ''Oh, yeah. We're gonna do some slammin' today.
+:'''Resistance 1:''' ''Oh, yeah. We're gonna do some slammin' today!
 ----
 '''Before combat:''' '' ''<br />
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 }}
-{{Mission Clue|Name=The real brains|Text=You defeated Poster Gal, but discovered that she isn't the brains behind the bombing operation! As she collapsed, she laughed that you were too late- a group of Resistance led by a man named Double Barrel has already planted bombs all around [[Nova Praetoria|Nova]] and are plannin to blow them up!}}
+{{Mission Clue|Name=The real brains|Text=You defeated Poster Gal, but discovered that she isn't the brains behind the bombing operation! As she collapsed, she laughed that you were too late - a group of Resistance led by a man named Double Barrel has already planted bombs all around [[Nova Praetoria|Nova]] and are planning to blow them up!}}
 ===== {{UL|Disarm the Resistance bombs in Nova!}} =====
 {{Mission Objective|Entrance=|Primary=Disarm the Resistance bombs in Nova!|Secondary=Disarm 4 bombs|Additional=|Completion=You've disarmed all the bombs, but there are still more left in the Memorial Hospital!}}
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 {{Mission Clue|Name=Ominous Message|Text=You disarmed all the bombs in Nova, but an audio message played on the final one, clearly recorded by someone in the Resistance...
-{{blue|You got us good, gettin' those bombs, {{Character}}. Too bad, you aren't lookin upward, huh? Them bombs, they weren't gonna send much of a message. At worst, they bought us time. At best, they were gonna increase the body count. See, right now, as you are listenin' to this, we got ourselves a squad inside the hospital. You ain't gonna be able to stop us before the whole building goes kaboom! I just think it's too bad I couldn't have metcha face to face to take you out myself! - This is DB signing off!}} }}
+{{blue|You got us good, gettin' those bombs, {{Character}}. Too bad, you aren't lookin' upward, huh? Them bombs, they weren't gonna send much of a message. At worst, they bought us time. At best, they were gonna increase the body count. See, right now, as you are listenin' to this, we got ourselves a squad inside the hospital. You ain't gonna be able to stop us before the whole building goes kaboom! I just think it's too bad I couldn't have metcha face to face to take you out myself! - This is DB signing off.}} }}
 ===== {{UL|Find an alternate way into Cole Memorial Hospital}} =====
 {{Mission Briefing|Contact=Cleopatra|Text=What's that?
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 :* {{green|Are you out of your mind? Blowing up a hospital is progress?}}
-::Out of my mind? No, I'm not out of my mind, Pharaoan Guard, I'm just focused on what has to be done.
+::Out of my mind? No, I'm not out of my mind, {{Character}}, I'm just focused on what has to be done.
 ::The people need to see that Cole is fallible, that Cole is just a man. A blow to the hospital would show that Cole can't protect the people from everything. But, not today. What's more important is keeping your cover, and your cover involves saving that hospital.
-::We need you deep in the Loyalists, Pharaoan Guard, and sometimes that means making sacrifices. When you take down Double Barrel, make sure to plant some tracking bugs on him - that way we can see where they take him and bust him out later on.
+::We need you deep in the Loyalists, {{Character}}, and sometimes that means making sacrifices. When you take down Double Barrel, make sure to plant some tracking bugs on him - that way we can see where they take him and bust him out later on.
 ::{{green|Alright, Scott.}}
-:* {{green|So you want me to let them do this?}}
+::* {{green|So you want me to let them do this?}}
-Not today, {{Character}}. It looks like Double Barrel has run into some bad luck on this one. His mission on the hospital is important, but not as important as keeping you as an undercover agent in the Loyalists.
+:::Not today, {{Character}}. It looks like Double Barrel has run into some bad luck on this one. His mission on the hospital is important, but not as important as keeping you as an undercover agent in the Loyalists.
-We'll need you to go in there and take him out to stop the bombing plot. Oh, also, try to plant some tracking devices on him and the soldiers you defeat. It'll help us break them all out of whatever prison the PPD send them to.
+:::We'll need you to go in there and take him out to stop the bombing plot. Oh, also, try to plant some tracking devices on him and the soldiers you defeat. It'll help us break them all out of whatever prison the PPD send them to.
-* {{green|Will do, Scott.}}
+::* {{green|Will do, Scott.}}
 * {{green|I am, but I have a question, first. What happened with Monroe?}}
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 :The group that you've been fighting is a group of 'rebel Syndicate' - if you could say that about a group that is centered around organized crime.
-:They're seeking to use this cell of the Resistance they found towards their own ends.
+:They're seeking to ''use'' this cell of the Resistance they found towards their own ends.
 :{{green|And so the hospital bombing plot was their doing}}
-:Exactly. I wish we could claim credit for it -and carry it out- but doing so would not only reveal your cover as a member of the Resistance, but it would also aid a group that seeks to undermine all of the Resistance.
+:Exactly. I ''wish'' we could claim credit for it -and carry it out- but doing so would not only reveal your cover as a member of the Resistance, but it would also aid a group that seeks to undermine all of the Resistance.
 :You'll need to carry out your orders and take down everyone you find in that hospital - especially the Syndicate.
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 '''Before combat:'''<br />
 :'''Resistance 1:''' ''These sins, they really know how to set up a plan, huh? I think we gotta work more often with them.''<br />
-:'''Resistance 2:''' ''Yeah, I think so too, long as them mary-lous ain't gonna bring us down by going against them.''<br />
+:'''Resistance 2:''' ''Yeah, I think so too, long as them mary-lou's ain't gonna bring us down by going against them.''<br />
 '''Combat start:'''<br />
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 '''At 75% Life:''' ''You really don't understand, do you? {{Character}}, was it?''<br />
 '''At 50% Life:''' ''You're part of a dying breed, a dying nation. Cole may rule, but we will control everything else.''<br />
-'''At 25% Life:''' ''It doesen't matter if I'm defeated. We have people everywhere.''<br />
+'''At 25% Life:''' ''It doesn't matter if I'm defeated. We have people everywhere.''<br />
 '''Defeated:''' ''Your victory is a hollow one, {{Character}}.''
 }}